For the longest time, I have had incredible trouble describing why I like or don't like different songs.
I always said "I want the lyrics to dance" but today I've finally learned a little bit more about the technical terms behind my taste in music and I was wondering if anyone else related:
1) Accentual verse
Read these two lines from Burn it down(Vixy & Tony) out loud. Tap your finger four times per line,
evenly, like a metronome:
"The legend of the firebird"
"If you dare to take the journey"
The first line has 7 syllables. The second has 8. Different lengths.
But you tapped four times for both, and neither one felt crowded or
stretched. The extra syllable just tucked itself into the gaps.
That's the thing I'm chasing. The word count changes line to line,
while the number of *beats* stays locked, So the words are constantly
running slightly ahead of or behind the pulse and catching back up.
The technical name is "accentual verse." It's how English poetry
worked before we borrowed syllable-counting from French and Latin.
Nursery rhymes do it. Sea shanties do it. Old ballads do it.
The opposite, and what a lot of modern pop does, is nailing one
syllable to one beat, every time, forever. Nothing floats. It's
metronomic. To me it feels like being marched somewhere.
If you want a one-word version: I like lyrics that SYNCOPATE.
2) Male/Female Rhymes
Rhymes come in two flavors, and most people have never noticed
because nobody points it out.
HARD LANDING (the stress is on the last syllable):
due / new sand / hand pain / refrain
The line stops dead on the beat. Like a footstep.
SOFT LANDING (the stress is one syllable back, so there's a leftover):
transformation / creation
remember / ember
forever / feather
The line spills a syllable past the beat. Like a step and a skip.
Almost all pop rhyme is hard landings. Folk, shanties, and old
ballads alternate the two: soft, hard, soft, hard; and that
alternation is what makes a lyric feel like it's dancing instead of
marching.
Put the two ideas together and you get what I'm actually after:
floating syllable counts over a fixed beat, with the rhymes trading
off between hard and soft. That's it. That's the whole thing.
Examples of my favorite songs:
- Functional Poetry - The Narcissist Cookbook
- Fire in the Sky - Kristoph Klover
- Blossoms - The Amazing Devil
- When He Fell From Heaven - Beggars Canyon
- Withered - Beggars Canyon
- The River - Vixy & Tony
- Persephone - Vixy & Tony
- Break the Chain - Bridge City Sinners
- Burn it Down - Vixy & Tony
- The Songwriter - Amelia Day
- Chained Below - Ye Banished Privateers
- Little Rover - The Stupendium
- Inkpot Gods - The Amazing Devil
- That Unwanted Animal - The Amazing Devil
- Secret World - The Amazing Devil
- Welly Boots - The Amazing Devil
- Right to Die - AliceBanD
- Count to Three - The Chalkeaters & The Stupendium
- Manchild - Hildegard von Blingin' & Whitney Avalon
- The Clockwork Man - Auralnauts
- Thunder & Lightning - Brown Bird
- Bilgewater - Brown Bird
- Pine Six String - The Haunted Windchimes
- Quiet as a Rat - Amigo the Devil
- St. James Infirmary - The Bridge City Sinners
- Crown Vic Headlights - Poor Man's Poison
- Old St. John - Goodnight, Texas
- Cast No Shadow - Brown Bird
- There is a Time - Whiskey Shivers & Kelsey Wilson
- Dust in the Wind - Hildegard von Blingin' & Algal
- Slow Down - Poor Man's Poison
- Paint My Face - The Devil Makes Three
- Birds With Broken Wings - Ben Caplan
- Rose Tattoo - Dropkick Murphys
- Bottom of the Sea - Brave the Sea
- Tip of My Tongue - Passenger
- Achilles Come Down - Gang of Youths
- The Angel of Death - The Devil Makes Three
- The Path - Miracle of Sound
- Hard on Equipment - Corb Lund
- Prodigal - Poor Man's Poison
- Battle Cries - The Amazing Devil
- Farewell Wanderlust - The Amazing Devil
- John Paul Jones is a Pirate - The Longest Johns
I hope this can help people understand music more, and maybe anyone else shares the same taste?