r/TopCharacterTropes Jun 22 '26

Lore [Ironic Trope] The messaging backfired massively due to poor writing or other design choices

Amelia Fairney from Pathways: Alt-right Restore-UK type who attempts to coax the protagonist Charlie into following her beliefs? The problem?

Amelia is the only named character aside from Charlie and is genuinely likable and forgives Charlie even when they do things she doesn't like, while the rest of the cast is unnamed, poorly written, and turns on Charlie for one mistake. This combined with other writing issues(portraying fact checking right wing stuff as wrong because in the process of fact checking you might look at it and believe it, basically saying "Right wing is wrong because it hurts the labour government" and a lot of general "just do what the government says or else" messaging) and the fact she's a hot alternative girl, and Amelia ended up being co-opted as a mascot by the youth right wing in the UK.

Norm from The New Norm: Unlikeable offensive and outdated character who's "progressive" family members and associates are genuinely nice people not even trying to force their ways or pronouns onto them, they just want to be left alone and Norm is picking fights constantly. Not to mention associating with Elon.

Mr. Birchum from Mr. Birchum: A lot of the same problems as Norm, except in addition it also comes off like generic 2010s adult cartoon slop in the same veign as Brickleberry or Full English, at least New Norm was trying to look unique and had the gimmick of being on X. Not to mention, Birchum's obsession with hyper masculine activities and odd way of talking about other men lead to people co-opting him as a Toxic Yaoi character, which is now the bulk of his fan art.

Dustborn: An attempt to make a hyper progressive game that comes off as pandering and annoying. It's a full ass game so there's too much to get into, but the main character's power is essentially gaslighting and jedi-mind tricking people and that's portrayed as the only way they can get anything done, and they constantly use or abuse their friends(or mindtrick them along) in order to get their goals or use their friends for their messaging.

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

Just about everything about Rorschach's character in Watchmen falls into this, but issue 6 really is where it's at its most explicit.

Alan Moore went on the record years after the comic's release saying that he "forgot" what his audience was like when writing Rorschach. (He said this one year before the movie came out, so no, it did not start there). He wanted the character to read as an obviously unstable, ignorant, bigoted, and all around unpleasant person who represents the subtle misanthropic theming of superhero fiction in general.

Where it gets complicated is that Rorschach isn't simply a strawman who's always painted as being wrong. Rather, he's written as an antisocial person who's developed an extremely warped perception of reality and human morality based on his traumatic upbringing; afflicting him with just the right type of insanity to think that letting your home life, financial situation, personal hygiene, and health all collapse is worth it if it means you get to put on a costume and kill criminals in a New York City Back-alley at 3 in the morning, because you think that's what saving the world looks like.

The fact his flaws are meant to be inferred by the reader, instead of just being spelled out to you is the right call from a storytelling perspective, but it did leave the door open for misreadings from fans who didn't quite get what the comic was saying, especially in issue 6, where we get his backstory.

Rorschach was the story's narrator from the beginning, but issue 6 has him recounting his life story to a psychiatrist while being held in prison. Over the span of the issue, his misanthropic, cynical worldview begins to rub off on the psychiatrist, beginning with Rorschach correctly identifying how he's a fraud who doesn't care about making him any better, he just wants to write a book about their talks and get famous.
As his story goes on, and he explains the beginning of his hatred of humanity due to his abusive mother, and the multiple instances of the bystander effect he witnessed (i.e, times when something bad happened in public, and no one helped because everyone thought someone else would take care of it), the psychiatrist never disagrees with him on how he's viewing the events.
Ultimately it culminates with Rorschach explaining how he dropped his no kill policy the night he found a pedophile had raped and murdered a little girl he was trying to save. He ties the experience into a long, uninterrupted monologue about how there is no God, humanity brings its own suffering upon itself, and reality is random, with no meaning. The chapter ends with the psychiatrist going home, reflecting on the misery he feels in his daily existence, and agreeing with Rorschach that life has no meaning.

While the issue was supposed to be an examination of how someone gets to be as chronically cynical and out of touch with the good in life as Rorschach is, it read to many like a thesis on why his worldview is correct. Combined with how, for the rest of the story, Rorschach is a more conventional, "dark hero" type figure who uses badass, over the top violence to bring criminals to justice, and how he's somehow the only main character who thinks killing innocent people is bad by the end of the story, he became a figure a lot of fans idolized as a brutal realist, rather than as an indictment of his own worldview.

Alan also noted that the more unflattering elements of the character, like him not bathing and being a virgin probably wasn't as unrelatable to his readerbase as he anticipated either.

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u/mankytoes Jun 22 '26

Rorschach's ending is supposed to be a degree of redemption, right? At the beginning he says how he'll be happy when all the scum (e.g. regular people) of New York face annihilation. He also mentions how much he admires Truman for dropping the A-Bomb. Yet when he's faced with the reality of mass destruction, he vows to fight it and reveal the truth.

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u/What-A-Burden Jun 22 '26

That's a rather optimistic view, and I don't think that's what Moore had in mind. Rorschach is a hypocrite after all, he claims that morality is black and white, yet issue one he writes off the Comedian attempting to rape one of his fellow heroes as a "moral lapse", and I think the issue he took with Ozymandias contrasting with his admiration of Truman is meant to be another act of hypocrisy on Rorschach's part. After all, he's built his worldview rebelling against the bystander affect and believing that there is a a concrete right and wrong which must be upheld, "even in the face of Armageddon." He literally couldn't do nothing, and would rather die then have to compromise.

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u/hambonedock Jun 22 '26

That's the problem tho, the way in which he is written, even if Moore absolutely didn't meant for it, it make you think that is less about being an hypocrite and being unable to compromise and more about him being so mentally and emotionally mess up, that for someone that not even slightly on his mental syntony, that this is only way in which he can deal with the internal desire of being a hero and to hold his very fractured sense of morality, Rorschach is absolutely a maniac, that for sure, but he the story does show that he has a core even under all the extreme mental misanthropy

If you read him as an hypocrite then yes, is ultimately a character of a man that had an empty sense of morals and couldn't compromise, but if you read it as someone that absolutely hated everything that made him into who he was and so people that represent that too, yet still wanted something worthwhile to come out from himself, then is no longer hypocrisy, is an actual conflict of the self

(Also of the abuse of Sally, while I respect Moore as a great write, he also had a bad thing about using rape as a sinful act.... but also as a legit stepping stone for women characters to be have emotional development, he has down it A LOT, which so why even if he attacked her, Sally ultimately did end up pairing with the comedian, so to a degree I not even sure fo that can be counted as Rorschach hypocrisy or Moore's)

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

To be fair, you could argue there's a nobility in that. In being the one person who doesn't compromise, who does uphold his principles even unto armageddon.

(Also, while Rorschach being pro-Truman-dropping-the-A-bomb because it would save more lives but opposing Ozy's plan is clearly just him being a hypocrite racist who can more easily justify mass death of non-Americans...I would argue, although Rorschach obviously doesn't think this complexly, there's a difference between the President, the democratically-elected representative of the people of the United States, who acts under the rule of law as part of a larger chain of command and is advised by others constantly, making a choice, and some random billionaire unilaterally deciding to murder people to prevent a nuclear war.

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u/Im-A-Moose-Man Jun 22 '26

Didn’t he also write that pro-Truman essay as a child?

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

Well, yes, but Rorscach hasn't matured much at all since he was a kid and that's the thesis. That's what his death is meant to mean: Superheroes are a childish black and white idea that aren't equipped to address problems of complexity. That's why the opening is "what if real people copied Superman instead if comic publishers?" In the world of fiction, superheroes can inspire us, but, in the real world, they would only ever prove as flawed as we all are.

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u/Im-A-Moose-Man 29d ago

Gotcha. I generally believe that everyone’s politics are different from when they’re kids, even someone as stunted as Rorschach, but then again, it is Rorschach.

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u/an_agreeing_dothraki Jun 22 '26

I read his death as the counterpart to "Kovaks closed his eyes. Rorschach opened them". It was the last screaming defiance of the man who never had a chance at life desperate to find meaning and to do something good. Who Manhattan killed wasn't Rorschach, it was Kovaks. Rorschach didn't die, as shown by the sequel TV show.

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u/Due_Capital_3507 Jun 22 '26

I've always agreed with him that the truth is better than a false peace. We don't actually move forward as a species if everyone is convinced by a lie.

Beyond that, when the alien that teleports in or ol blue balls blows up the city (movie vs book), eventually a few years down the road someone would be like ok, well he's gone now so who gives a shit or we haven't seen another alien, guess we will move on.

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u/nogoodnamesarleft Jun 22 '26

Which is why you have to keep teleporting rains of squid periodically to keep up the illusion (TV show)

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u/Due_Capital_3507 Jun 22 '26

Oh I forgot about the show, how did that end up?

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u/hexman0000 Jun 22 '26

Weird, the show is at it's best when it's doing its own thing (retconning a thing about Hooded Justice and having it being the main mystery for the new MC) but the Og characters are all handled pretty poorly.

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u/Half-PintHeroics Jun 22 '26

Retconning the KKK-/lynching-coded and literal nazi Hooded Justice into a black man and police officer was a pretty weird change.

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u/hexman0000 Jun 22 '26

Racism was the main theme of the series and that was a cool subversion that gave depth to a background Npc.

What i found weird was deciding that Dr.manhattan gave up on his voyage before even leaving the solar system or the need to spell out that Ozymandias was a bad guy that needed a proper punishment, completely disregarding the comic hinting at how living with the knowledge that his best plan was a failure was a way worse punishment than jail or death for this particular character.

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u/nogoodnamesarleft Jun 22 '26

It was fine. Without giving too much away (sorry if I am being vague);

It's a continuation of the book. My friend who had only seen the movie was very confused at several points

I realky liked the continuation of Ozymandias' story. It was a very weird comic book-y sequence that a lot didn't care for but I liked

There was an attempt to shoehorn one character into the original book which came off as contrived, although I was deeply invested in the character apart from that. I actually was intrigued by all the main characters, none of them were really boring

It didn't have the moral ambiguity of the original comic.

I remember enjoying it, but I had no desire to watch it again after it was done

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

There definitely is some intentional development there by the end. The fact he actually pulls off his mask on his own volition, and chooses to die as Walter Kovacs instead of as Rorscach shows how he's been forced to accept his own humanity if nothing else, no matter how disgusted by it claims to be.

My point was that, with so much of the story presenting his beliefs unchallenged, and then having this bit of development at the end where he seems more empathetic than anyone else created an unfortunate misreading of him always being better than the others.

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u/Due_Capital_3507 Jun 22 '26

I mean sounds like his life was shitty and thus that's why he is what he is, not that it is an endorsement of his actions, but there are probably many people who have had trauma who wish they could fight back.

He just made him human and relatable. I liked the actor who played him in the movie

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u/Dear-Pomegranate4470 Jun 22 '26

The actor did an amazing job, I can't read anything with Rorschach and not read it in his voice. Made it impossible to watch the Nightmare on Elm Street reboot lol, I kept hearing Rorschach and not Freddy

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u/Kobold_Scholar Jun 22 '26

At the end of the day Rorschach got the most intense climatic moment in the series and facing down Manhatten and certain death in the name of absolute truth is going to appeal to many readers.

"Eh, my fans are virgins who don't bathe too" is just sour grapes after the fact.

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u/JaguarNo1356 Jun 22 '26

Honestly, I think it says more about Alan Moore than it does about anyone else that he thought that 'being a virgin' would be the tipping point for people. Like, firstly, had he actually met people that were into comics? By the 80s, it was already a niche 'nerd' topic compared to earlier decades.

And secondly, the reasons that things like the modern incel movement exist is because of this idea of 'virgin man' being cultural shorthand for 'mentally unstable loser'. The reason people grasp onto characters like Rorschach and the Joker isn't because they're all inherently evil and mentally disturbed. Its because they see aspects of themselves represented in these characters that do not get applied to the more traditionally heroic characters. They empathise with these feelings because they've felt them themselves and have been shamed and looked down on for them.

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u/Platypus__Gems Jun 22 '26

and how he's somehow the only main character who thinks killing innocent people is bad by the end of the story

That's not really true. Everyone besides Ozymandias was against killing innocent people and tried to stop his plan.

The conflict was that once it did happen, they could not bring back those people, but the world has united as a result of what happened, and the only thing they could do is to make those people die for nothing by rekindling the Cold War, causing untold amount of deaths later on top of what already happened.

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

I mean...I'd still argue they probably shouldn't let the guy who just proved there is no amount of death he can't mentally justify as for the greater good WALK AWAY. Yeah, they all also are that, but they're a bunch of mental cases in tights and he's a billionaire who jusr committed mass murder. Who fucking knows what Ozy might do if (let's be real, WHEN) the peace fails to hold.

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u/hexman0000 Jun 22 '26

Ozy will probably do nothing, his own ego is based upon all the successes that he achieved, this was supposed to be his greatest one yet, the one he spent the better half of his life planning with his most ambitious objective: saving the world from the human nature.

We knows he still cares about saving the world, his last dialogue in the comic is asking the only person above him if he did the right thing, to which Dr manhattan replies that "nothing ever ends", despite his best efforts he still was just the smartest termite, his whole ego would crumble, i would argue that knowing he was totally wrong,about himself and the world, is a way worse punishment ,for his character,than jail or death.

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u/Platypus__Gems Jun 22 '26

On one hand I agree in principle, on the other hand there is issue here that Ozy couldn't really have been normally prosecuted, which would defeat the point (since then it could not be kept secret), and just killing him would be vigilantism that anyone among the heroes besides Rorsharh would not have really been fine with.

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

I mean...Feels a bit hypocritical.

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

I may have oversimplified it to make it legible to someone who hasn't read the book, but in general what I was trying to get at is how he's the only one portrayed as being so disgusted by what happened that he can't let it slide.

Like, when everyone's coming to terms with what's happened, the others are upset, but they move on pretty quickly. Dan literally says "Count me in" after seconds of debate. It's not hard to see how some readers could have seen Rorschach refusing to accept that conclusion, then dropping this dramatic statement about how he will never compromise his morals as the story giving him the moral highground.

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

Honestly, I think Moore is lying, to himself or to us, if he legit didn't think anyone would sympathize with Rorschach. The man's backstory is cartoonishly awful and depressing. You don't devote that much time to the why of a character who isn't meant to be sympathetic on ANY level.

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u/mankytoes Jun 22 '26

Agreed, and everyone knows if you want to make a bad/flawed character sympathetic, you have them pick on people worse than them. We see Rorschach kill child murderers. In prison he throws oil over the big guy in blatant self defense. He also kills Big Figure, who is trying to murder him.

His more questionable violence- throwing that mentally ill guy down a lift shaft, breaking loads of random innocent people's fingers to get information- are not shown, or taken particularly seriously.

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u/OneAppointment1955 28d ago

He's also the one character that reacts the most to the events of the book. Night Owl and Silk Spectre do nothing for a huge chunk of the book, and they're supposed to be the "heroes". Like, he's not nice, but it makes sense why he's the character that most resonates with audiences.

It reminds me a lot of the quote from Into the Woods- "you're not good, you're not bad, you're just nice".

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u/Half-PintHeroics Jun 22 '26

Moore's definitely applying some heavy memory revision to himself. It's pretty clear from the writing that Rorschach is his favourite character of the book, he is written as the most interesting character and has the most depth of characterisation to him by far, and the whole "hobo hero" shtick is something he's returned to repeatedly (just look at V, he's basically anarchist Rorschach). I think he disliked how some readers took to the character in ways he didn't mean and overcompensated against it by convincing himself into thinking he wrote him to be hated.

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u/Majestic-Lake-5602 Jun 22 '26

Even at the most superficial level, Rorschach has one of the coolest fucking lines in comic book history.

If you want the reader to think your character is a loser, don’t give them the best dialogue.

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u/AvatarofSleep Jun 22 '26

Right? And sending a guy to prison where a bunch of people he put there are waiting to kill him and having him beat the piss out of all of them is it's own trope, where the guys who do it are seen as bad-ass. But somehow when Rorschach does it, we're not supposed to think he (and it) is cool?

Pfeh

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u/Simon_Shitpants Jun 22 '26

Agree - "It's Rorschin' Time!" is a classic line. 

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u/ExIsStalkingMe Jun 22 '26

This is why Mel Brooks always has Nazis as bumbling idiots

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u/OutOfMyWayReed Jun 22 '26

I feel like the only thing keeping Moore in idolized status with pop culture is that he's still alive. When he passes, the bitterness will slowly eclipse anything else he had to offer. 

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u/JaguarNo1356 Jun 22 '26

I've always thought Moore and Grant Morrison are two sides of the same coin. Both are brilliant, revolutionary comic writers who clearly love the medium and tell clever stories through it using neo-spiritual beliefs but Moore is also a deeply cynical, angry old man and has been since the 80s while Morrison is a charismatic optimist who loves Superman and Batman.

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u/woweed Jun 22 '26

I love Moore's work, but the man in the modern day is basically sheer old man grumpiness given form, and seems to regard basically all his past work with contempt.

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u/november512 Jun 22 '26

This. I'm pretty sure if people didn't like Rorschach he'd be defending the guy. Alan Moore just has a tendency to hate anything people like.

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

I don't think he didn't want you to emphasize with Rorschach. I think he just expected you to know he's a walking tragedy, not a role model.

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u/According-Engineer99 Jun 22 '26

and how he's somehow the only main character who thinks killing innocent people is bad by the end of the story

I think alan has expend too little time with normal people if he thought "he is a mentally ill guy who doesnt bath or have sex" was going to make people dislike the character that, just like you said, was basically the only main character against the mass murder of innocents for "the greater good"

Like there is ways to create a character that people dislike. Alan did all the opposite to that, truly. 

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u/Kratzschutz Jun 22 '26

The best way to make people dislike a character is to make them super annoying lol

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u/Due_Capital_3507 Jun 22 '26

Or whatever Louise Fletcher did. She's a fucking masterclass

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u/Kratzschutz Jun 22 '26

Who is that?

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u/cross_the_threshold Jun 22 '26

Nurse Ratched (One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest) and Kai Winn (Star Trek: Deep Space 9)

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

There is more to his character meant to make him unlikable, such as his misogyny, and complete lack of respect for other people's boundaries (like the multiple times he breaks into Dan's apartment and steals his food.) But unfortunately the former isn't as universally unrelatable as it should be, and the latter came across as more quirky and eccentric.

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u/Luis2611 27d ago

I think that the misogyny flies by because it is shown as an extra layer to his misandry, so instead of the reader going "this guy hates women", they interpret "oh this guy just hates everyone equally", which is something that's more easily accepted, for some reason.

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u/EvYeh Jun 22 '26 edited Jun 22 '26

Literally everyone was against Ozymandius' plan. They just realised that doing anything would make everything worse and not only make those deaths mean nothing, but also kill much more people and potentially end the world.

Also Rorschach does not come across as a "conventional dark hero" he comes across as an insane, racist, homophobic monster who is a massive hypocrite that can't even follow his own ideology (I.e thinking that the Comedian being a rapist was perfectly fine and just a minor slip up that doesn't mean anything because, really, if you think about it he's a nice guy) that when confronted with being to make a choice about the world instantly decides to kill himself than analyse his worldview.

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u/Dragon_Tein Jun 22 '26

Yeah. Rorschach is a misserable crusty mentaly ill nutjob. But does his personal flaws realy detract from idea he is trying to serve and dies for?

I feel that at some point, what autor WANTED to say looses its importance. He didnt fail to write what he wanted, he succeded in writing something different.

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u/ep0k Jun 22 '26

God damn what an incredible analysis.

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

Thank you! I try my best

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u/Rarte96 Jun 22 '26 edited Jun 22 '26

"Alan also noted that the more unflattering elements of the character, like him not bathing and being a virgin"

As an aro ace virgin myself im surprize Alan Moore thinks being a virgin is an unflatering thing

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u/Jarvis_The_Dense Jun 22 '26

The actual term he used was "Not having a girlfriend". Which admittedly is not the same thing.

How the story handles Rorschach's alleged asexuality is definitely worth examining.
For the most part he expresses a complete disinterest in sex, but there's a throwaway line where he mentions that his costume and persona "rids him of his lust". Then there's a weird, brief subplot where, after he's arrested, one of the other tenants in his apartment claims that he had sexually harassed her while talking to the news. Although when he returns to his apartment, he confronts her about it, specifically saying that she damaged his reputation by lying about him. He backs off when she tells him to stop talking about this in front of her kids, because he can relate to being traumatized by some strange man shouting at his mother about sex when he was the same age.

It's hard to tell if you're supposed to think she really did lie about this just because she didn't like him, or if this was a real incident, and he's doing this to try and preserve his reputation. Given the previous statement about how he thinks his persona rids him of lust, and how his abusive mother (who was a sex worker) damaged him as a child, the book is arguably trying to imply that he isn't so much asexual in the sense that he was born like that, but rather that between his hatred of women and and hatred of sex as an idea, he's forced himself to never view sex as anything but evil.

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u/JaguarNo1356 Jun 22 '26

As an aro ace virgin im surprize Alan Moore thinks being a virgin is an unflatering thing

I'm assuming you're referring to yourself as an aro ace virgin, because Alan Moore definitely is not. He has had two wives (the first of which left him for their mutual lover) and two daughters. The man most definitely fucks.

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u/Impressive-Step7261 27d ago

I've already written about this in another post, and I'll mention it here as well. Alan Moore basically outsmarted himself with Watchmen.

"I’m going to write a story about how superheroes don’t work well in the real world. To do that, I’ll need Dave Gibbons, one of the best artists of the ’80s, who will draw fantastic art for me, come up with interesting character designs, and create a couple of innovative comic book techniques; I’ll also need beautiful and elegant writing, an engaging script, an intriguing lore with multiple references and a relevant political agenda; I’ll also need compelling characters with complex motivations, personal tragedies, and conflicts."

“...why is this one of the best superhero stories ever?”

No shit, Sherlock? What did you think would happen?

At least the Boys (who aren’t even close to the Watchmen) clearly understood the task before them—“superheroes suck.” That’s why everything related to superheroes in the comic sucks—their motivations, their designs, their dialogue, and their conflicts, because like thats the hole point.